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Selphie Zetsumei
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PostSubject: Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols    Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols  I_icon_minitime07/02/11, 07:48 pm

Weapon Name: Vie & Trépas

Weapon Type: Desert Eagle Pistols

Weapon Affinity: None.

Weapon Sealed Description: All black pistols With a few scuffs from being used so much. Even through the scuffs are there they are polished quite well and shine brightly.

Weapon Background: Used to kill by criminal hands the pistols were traded to bad men, stolen, used and stolen by another to commit more crimes. Selphie had wandered into a gang fight when she somehow got pulled into it. Taking out everyone it was the man With these two pistols and selphie left. Easily selphie took him down and as her reward took the pistols. She planned to just simply sell them but somehow she grew attached to them and keeps them as a preference to use them over her scythe,

http://www.rps.net/QS/GUNS/desert-eagle5.jpg


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Sakura
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PostSubject: Re: Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols    Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols  I_icon_minitime08/02/11, 03:25 am

Coulda ya possibly get a bit more detail? You know, just to make it sound better is all. I understand the simplicity you want, but be more creative with the story <3
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PostSubject: Re: Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols    Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols  I_icon_minitime08/02/11, 09:44 am

Well I can't really. The point to these weapons is that they arnt special at all, they are normal and there is nothing to them.
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PostSubject: Re: Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols    Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols  I_icon_minitime08/02/11, 11:04 am

Well I mean, could you possibly atleast make the pistols a little more detailed in design? Like, add in some decorative etchings, add on pearl handles, make something gold xD Anything just to make it a tiny bit more detailed
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PostSubject: Re: Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols    Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols  I_icon_minitime08/02/11, 07:28 pm

that better?
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PostSubject: Re: Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols    Vie & Trépas: Double Pistols  I_icon_minitime08/02/11, 07:37 pm

Much better <3 Sorry for being so picky.
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